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This post will show you how to write a strong IELTS thesis statement. It will also explain why you should vary your thesis statement according to the question type you are given in the IELTS writing test.

This post will look at:

• what a thesis statement is;
• how to identify the different question types;
• how to write a thesis statement for each question.

What is a thesis statement?

”A thesis is an idea put forward for consideration, especially one to be discussed or analysed.”

A thesis statement is the most important sentence in your IELTS writing task 2 answer.  It is contained in the introduction ; each introduction should have one, along with a paraphrase  of the question and an outline statement.

A thesis statement is your main idea. I often describe it to students as “the way you feel about the whole issue in one sentence”. It tells the examiner that you have understood the question, and it will lead to a clearer, more coherent essay.

Let’s look at an example of an IELTS thesis statement:

Question: There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use contributes to global warming and has other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.

Do you agree or disagree?

Thesis statement : This essay agrees that increasing motor vehicle use contributes to rising global temperatures and certain health issues.

As you can see, this sentence clearly shows the examiner how you feel about the question. The rest of your essay should support this statement.

How do I know what to write?

The first thing we need to do is to identify which type of question it is and look at the action words.  For example, in the question below, the action words are ‘do you agree or disagree?’

Question: There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.

Do you agree or disagree?

Therefore, we need to tell the examiner clearly whether we agree or disagree, which will influence our thesis statement.

Let’s look at other examples:

Computers are being used more and more in education.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

• Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers.

What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

The main keywords in each of the three questions above are more or less the same- education and computers. However, if we look at the action words, we can see that we must answer the three questions in very different ways, which will affect our thesis statement.

The action words are:

• What are some of the problems, and what are some of the possible solutions?

Therefore, it is important to take some time to analyse the question and establish what it  is actually asking us to do .

How do I write a thesis statement for each question type?

Once we have established what the question wants us to do, we can now think about our thesis statement. Below we will look at how to write a thesis statement for four different kinds of questions:

• Opinion Question (Do you agree or Disagree)
• Discussion Question (Discuss both points of view)
• Advantages and Disadvantage
• Problem and Solution.

You should remember that although IELTS writing part 2 questions normally follow a standard format as above, they sometimes change, and you should be prepared for that.

Opinion Question

Some aspects of celebrity culture have a bad influence on young people.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We have three choices with this kind of question:

• I both agree and disagree

I tell my students to only choose options one or two . Choosing option three will often lead to a confused and/or very long essay. If you have just one opinion and you stick to this, it will lead to a clear and well-argued essay.

Therefore, you have two choices.

• I agree that some aspects of celebrity culture negatively influence young people.
• I disagree that some aspects of celebrity culture negatively influence young people.

All of your thesis statements for this kind of question should start with:

This essay agrees that…..

This essay disagrees that…..

We should try to avoid using personal pronouns like ‘I’ and we, therefore, use ‘This essay….’ instead.

Also, remember that we should not copy the question as this is not allowed in the IELTS writing test, and instead, we should paraphrase.

For example, ‘ This essay agrees that some famous people’s lifestyles have a detrimental effect on today’s youth.’

Second Example Opinion Question

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems.

Thesis Statement: This essay disagrees that the best way to resolve increasing pollution and congestion problems is to raise the cost of fuel.

Discussion Question

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences.

For this question, we need to clearly state both sides of the argument and our own opinion.

We do this by simply paraphrasing the question, thus stating both sides, and then giving our own opinion. Our own opinion will be just one side of the argument.

Even if you favour both sides of the argument, state one. Again, this leads to a clearer answer.

Thesis statement: Some argue that schools and universities increasing the use of computers is beneficial, while others oppose this view. This essay agrees that the growing use of technology by educators is a positive development.

As you can see, this student has clearly stated both sides of the argument and stated which side of the argument she prefers.

Second Example Discussion Question

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others believe that school is the best place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Thesis statement: Some argue that teachers should teach youngsters how to be upstanding members of the community, whereas others feel this is the role of the mother and father. This essay agrees that this duty should be filled primarily by parents.

Advantage and Disadvantages Question

In this question, we need to clearly state what we think the main advantage is and the main disadvantage.

Thesis Statement: The principal advantages are the instant information available to students and the ability to communicate with other students. The main disadvantages are the lack of discipline and motivation provided by computers.

Second Advantage and Disadvantages Question

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Thesis statement: The principal advantage is that exposing children to languages as early as possible leads to higher proficiency levels later in life, which outweighs the main disadvantage of young children being overwhelmed by too many subjects.

Problem and Solution Question

What is a problem associated with reliance on computers, and what is a possible solution? 

Our thesis statement will need to state one main problem and one main solution.

Thesis statement: The principal problem is students allowing machines to do all the work for them without thinking for themselves, and a possible solution is to have stricter supervision from teachers and parents.

Cause and Solution Question

In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing, and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

What do you think is the cause of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve this?

Thesis statement: The principal cause of this problem is people’s sedentary lifestyles, and a possible solution is to educate society about the dangers of not keeping fit.

This is just a broad overview of IELTS thesis statements, and it should be read in conjunction with my article on how to write an effective introduction to be fully understood.

**Please note**

It should be reiterated that these are the four most common question types that come up in the IELTS writing test. However, these question types sometimes do vary, and you should be ready to change your IELTS thesis statements and introductions accordingly.

To do this confidently on the day of your exam, you must have practised many times beforehand.

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How to write an IELTS thesis statement.

Ielts essay introductions and thesis statements..

updated: July 27th 2022. When writing the introduction of an IELTS essay there are two steps that need to be taken. Paraphrase the task question and write a Thesis Statement . If the question asks for an opinion then it must be in the thesis statement. It depends on the type of essay you are writing as they are not all the same. It is advisable to write a thesis in the introduction for every type of essay. A good thesis statement can help you get a good band score in task response in the writing section.

The thesis statement tells the examiner what the essay is going to be about and the conclusion of the essay paraphrases the thesis statement. Some teachers have other views and say that a thesis statement is not needed. There are different approaches to writing an IELTS essay. If you have 10 IELTS teachers in a room there will most likely be 10 different opinions on the matter.

In my opinion, a thesis statement is logical and shows the reader what to expect in the rest of the essay. However, do not confuse Thesis statements with memorised outline sentences. See this link here about that.

What exactly is a thesis statement?

‘A thesis statement tells the reader what your essay is going to be about in one or two sentences. It usually includes your opinion or states your position’

• Don’t use rhetorical questions in the thesis. The thesis statement is not a question.
• Make it clear what you are going to write about briefly (1 or 2 sentences)
• If it’s an opinion essay, give 2 reasons for your opinion in the thesis statement.
• The thesis statement comes after paraphrasing the question.
• Do not write an outline sentence, these look like a cliche and memorised. Examiners are trained to spot memorised phrases, for instance: ‘ This essay would like to explore reasons for this in more detail’
• Don’t confuse thesis statements with the above outline sentence. Outline sentences are for very long academic essays. See this lesson here on phrases to avoid.

For each essay type this is what should be in the Thesis statement:

1. Opinion essays: write 2 reasons for your opinion. 2. Advantage disadvantage essays:  state the advantage and the disadvantage, 3. Problem solution essays:   briefly state 1 or 2 problems and possible solutions. 4 . Discussion essays: after paraphrasing both sides of the argument, give your opinion with a reason why you hold that view. 5. Two part question essays: answer the 1st question then answer the 2nd question briefly.

First you have to identify what kind of essay it is.

The first step before you begin to write is to make sure you understand the question, then identify what kind of essay this will be. There are 5 variations on an IELTS discursive essay click here to see a lesson on this .

Before you write the thesis statement you will need to paraphrase the question , click here for a lesson on this. Click here to see how to write a good introduction to a Problem Solution essay.

1. Discussion essay.

This is the Paraphrased introduction with a Thesis statement.

A number of people believe serious crimes need to have a set punishment, whereas others argue that the situation of the crime must be considered. I agree that the circumstances of the crime itself should be taken into account because every case is different.

Thesis Statement: ‘ I agree that the circumstances of the crime itself should be taken into account because every case is different’

It is important to give a brief reason for your view, the body paragraphs should expand on this. The examiner can clearly see your position in the introduction. In this essay, my position is that every case is different and a prison sentence would not be appropriate.

Note: For a more academic feel, rather than using a personal pronoun to state your opinion, you could state your position like this below:

This essay agrees that the circumstances of the crime itself should be taken into account because every case is different.

2. Opinon essay.

Again you need to paraphrase the question and then clearly agree or disagree , remember to choose just one side.. the words: ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree’ means how much do you agree/disagree, or how far do you agree/disagree. You should mention the other side of the argument but stick to your own opinion. Balanced essays do not necessarily get a higher band score.

Give 2 reasons for your view in the thesis statement here. This is the Paraphrased introduction with a Thesis statement:

It is argued that society would be better off if every type of advertising was prohibited. I disagree that all advertising should be disallowed as this policy would not benefit society and would negatively impact the economy.

Thesis statement: ‘ I disagree that all advertising should be disallowed as this policy would not benefit societ y and would negatively impact the economy.’

In this thesis statement I have clearly stated why I hold the opinion that advertising should not be banned with 2 reasons (no benefit to society and bad for the economy)  Remember to keep the introduction to under 55 words or it will be too long.

As mentioned before, you can use a more academic way to state your view, such as:

This essay disagrees that all advertising should be disallowed because this policy would not benefit society and would have a negative impact on the economy.

3. Advantages disadvantages essay.

This is the Paraphrased introduction with a Thesis statement:

In recent times, people can reside wherever they want in the world because of the progress that has made in technology and transport. The main advantage is the career opportunities that a person can get outside their own country, while a possible downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.

Thesis statement: ‘ The main advantage is the career opportunities that a person can get outside their own country, while a possible downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.’

Try keeping the whole introduction under 55 words as you don’t want it to look like a body paragraph. You can write about 2 advantages and 2 disadvantages, but you need to keep the introduction concise.

Another method is to just refer to the advantage and state the disadvantage, such as:

In recent times, people can reside wherever they want in the world because of the progress that has made in technology and transport. Although there are advantages, the downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.’

This allows you to keep the thesis statement concise especially if you want to cover two advantages (or disadvantages)

4. Advantages disadvantages outweigh essay (this needs your opinion).

This type of advantage disadvantage essay is special because it asks ‘ Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?’. This means you have to write about what side you think is stronger and reflect that in the essay and also in the thesis statement. You need to state an opinion here.

Some experts argue that children should study a new language at primary school as opposed to secondary school. This essay agrees that the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages because youngsters pick up and master new languages much easier than at a high school age.

Thesis statement: ‘This essay agrees that the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages because youngsters pick up and master new languages much easier than at a high school age .’

I have underlined the reason for my opinion here. Giving a reason for your opinion is important in a thesis statement. The introduction is 44 words long so that will be fine. Remember to also address the other side of the issue in the main body paragraphs, the side you think is weaker.

Another method here is to use this style which is very concise at 32 words but it does not contain a reason for my view.

Some experts argue that youngsters should study a new language at primary school as opposed to secondary school. In my view, the advantages of younger children learning new languages outweigh the disadvantages.

5. Problem solution / causes solution essay.

People living in large cities have to deal with many issues in their day to day lives. The main problems people face are high rental costs and overcrowding. Some possible solutions would be to build more affordable housing and more green spaces.

Thesis statement: ‘ The main problems people face are high rental costs and overcrowding. Some possible solutions would be to build more affordable housing and more green spaces.’

I have listed 2 problems high rents, overcrowding and 2 solutions affordable housing, green spaces . You can choose just one problem and one solution and that would be fine.

6. Two part question (direct question essay).

The world wide web is a huge source of knowledge which has created opportunities for people worldwide to study. However, not all information on the internet can be trusted, so the government needs to put measures in place to protect people from false information.

Thesis statement: ‘ However, not all information on the internet can be trusted, so the government needs to put measures in place to protect people from false information.’

Two part question essays are sometimes called ‘Direct question’ essays. They consist of 2 direct questions in the task question. Sometimes they will ask for your opinion such as: Do you think….?  or   What do you think…?

If the question asks for the opinion then you must state it. You should briefly answer the 2 questions in the thesis statement then give more detail in the body paragraphs.

Check out the blog posts about how to identify the 5 essay types and also how to paraphrase the question . These are key stages before writing your thesis statement. Make sure your whole introduction is under 55 words or it will be too long.

Take a look here at how to write a good introduction in writing task 2. Now you can try.

Here is a Discussion essay question where you have to give your opinion. Can you write a Thesis statement for it?

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution.  Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Task question again:

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Paraphrased introduction: Some people argue that prohibiting private cars from city centres is the best way to tackle traffic congestion, whereas others say that this is unrealistic.

Thesis statement: I agree that private vehicles should be banned from city centres and more investment needs to be put into public transportation to alleviate traffic jams.

Full introduction with thesis statement:

Some people argue that prohibiting private cars from city centres is the best way to tackle traffic congestion, whereas others say that this is unrealistic. I agree that private vehicles should be banned from city centres and more investment needs to be put into public transportation to alleviate traffic jams.

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How to Write a Thesis Statement for IELTS Writing Task 2 ?

The IELTS Writing Task 2 is a challenging task that requires you to write an essay on a given topic in 40 minutes. One of the most important parts of your essay is the thesis statement. The thesis statement is the main argument or idea that you will be discussing in your essay. It sets the tone for your essay and guides the reader on what to expect. In this blog, we will discuss how to write a thesis statement for IELTS Writing Task 2.

What is a Thesis Statement?

A thesis statement is a sentence or two that summarizes the main point of an essay or research paper. It is usually placed in the introductory paragraph and provides a roadmap for the rest of the essay. The thesis statement should be specific, clear, and concise. It should also be arguable, meaning that there should be different opinions or perspectives on the topic.

Why is a Thesis Statement Important in IELTS Writing Task 2?

The thesis statement is an essential part of your  essay in IELTS Writing Task 2 . It tells the reader what to expect from your essay and sets the tone for the rest of the essay. A well-crafted thesis statement can help you to score higher in the exam. It shows that you have a clear understanding of the topic and have the ability to organize your ideas coherently.

Tips on Writing a Thesis Statement for IELTS Writing Task 2

1. understand the prompt.

The first step in writing a thesis statement for  IELTS Writing Task 2  is to understand the prompt. The prompt will provide you with a topic, and you need to ensure that you understand the topic before you start writing. Analyze the prompt and try to identify the keywords or phrases that can help you to develop your thesis statement.

2. Brainstorm Ideas

Once you have understood the prompt, the next step is to brainstorm ideas. Jot down all the ideas that come to your mind and try to connect them to the topic. Think about the main points that you want to make in your essay and how they relate to the topic. This will help you to develop a thesis statement that is specific and clear.

3. Make a Claim

The thesis statement should make a claim that is arguable. You should take a stance on the topic and provide a clear argument for your position. This will make your essay more interesting to read and help you to score higher in the exam. Avoid making a statement that is too general or vague, as it will not help you to develop a strong thesis statement.

4. Use Strong Language

Your thesis statement should use strong language that clearly states your position. Use phrases such as “I strongly believe that” or “It is clear that” to indicate your stance on the topic. Avoid using phrases such as “In my opinion” or “I think that,” as they make your thesis statement weak.

5. Keep it Concise

Your thesis statement should be concise and to the point. It should not be too long or complicated. Aim to write a thesis statement that is one or two sentences long and clearly conveys your main argument.

Examples of Thesis Statements for IELTS Writing Task 2

1. Prompt: Some people believe that social media has a negative impact on society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media and give your opinion.

Thesis Statement: While social media has its advantages, such as connecting people from different parts of the world, it also has its disadvantages, such as the spread of fake news and cyberbullying. In my opinion, the negative impact of social media on society outweighs the positive impact.

2. Prompt: Some people believe that children should be allowed to use mobile phones in school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Thesis Statement: Although mobile phones can be useful for educational purposes, such as researching information and communicating with teachers, they can also be a distraction and hinder students’ learning. Therefore, I believe that children should not be allowed to use mobile phones in school.

3. Prompt: Some people argue that the use of renewable energy is the key to a sustainable future. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of renewable energy and give your opinion.

Thesis Statement: Renewable energy has many advantages, such as reducing carbon emissions and decreasing reliance on fossil fuels, but it also has its disadvantages, such as high initial costs and intermittency. In my opinion, the benefits of renewable energy outweigh the drawbacks, and it is crucial for a sustainable future.

4. Prompt: Some people think that parents should be responsible for teaching their children how to manage money. Others believe that schools should be responsible for this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Thesis Statement: While parents play a crucial role in teaching their children about money management, schools can also contribute to this by providing financial education and practical skills. Therefore, both parents and schools should share the responsibility of teaching children how to manage money.

In conclusion, writing a strong thesis statement is crucial for success in IELTS Writing Task 2. The thesis statement sets the tone for your essay and guides the reader on what to expect. To write a strong thesis statement, you need to understand the prompt, brainstorm ideas, make a claim, use strong language, and keep it concise. By following these tips, you can develop a thesis statement that is specific, clear, and arguable. Don’t forget to provide supporting evidence and examples in your essay to strengthen your argument. With practice, you can master the art of writing a strong thesis statement and achieve success in IELTS Writing Task 2.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 is Essay Writing. Unfortunately, even candidates with a high level of English also score a low band because they don’t understand the strategy to write high-scoring essays. In this video our Expert IELTS instructor shares Effective Strategies for including a strong thesis statement in Paragraph 1 of IELTS Writing Task 2. The instructor also explains how to change the statement according to the question type you are given in the IELTS Writing test. 

What is a Thesis Statement? The thesis statement is an important part of an essay introduction, and it is essential that you know where to put it and how to write it. Thesis statement is contained in the first paragraph which is also called the introduction of your essay. In simpler words, a thesis statement is an idea that you put forward for consideration especially one to be discussed or analyzed in your essay. It is your main idea. It is the most important sentence of your essay. 

Your thesis statement tells the examiner that you have understood the question statement and it leads to a more coherent essay. How to write a thesis statement? - Identify what type of question it is. - Generate content. Give yourself 3-4 minutes to brainstorm and generate content. - Write according to the type of instruction Watch the video to understand better with the help of various examples.

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• October 06, 2022

Getting the exact IELTS band score you need for your dream program can be challenging, especially when it comes to the writing section. However, by learning effective writing skills, you will be sure to improve and get the score that you need.

For writing task 2, one of the most important skills for a high band score is thesis statement writing.

Read the post to learn more about thesis statements or skip to the section that most interests you.

Why do I need to write a thesis statement?

According to the British Council, the rubric for IELTS Writing Task 2 is made of four sections: Task Response,        Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resources, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy.

The second section, Coherence and Cohesion, is all about how effectively you can arrange information and connect your ideas. In short, this part assesses your essay structure.

If you want to show your teacher or test grader that you have great essay structure, learn to write a clear and strong thesis statement.

When an instructor or grader sees a good thesis statement, it signals that the essay writer knows what they are doing. It shows that the essay will be constructed of thoughtful points that are carefully connected, hopefully with transition phrases and other tools that create cohesion and readability.

In other words, a good thesis creates a good first impression.

What is a thesis statement?

An entire book could be written about the thesis statement, but it can be summarized as follows: one or two sentences that summarize the main points of the essay.

One way to think of a thesis statement is as a kind of preview or summary. Consider the last time you discovered a new show on Netflix or another streaming service.

There is probably a good chance that you picked that show for a few reasons: the cover image looked cool, the trailer seemed interesting, and the summary paragraph made the show sound enticing.

A thesis statement is like that preview paragraph on Netflix. Just like Netflix tells us what a show is about, the thesis statement tells us what an essay is about.

How do I write a thesis statement?

Before we discuss thesis statement writing, let’s quickly review the basic structure of IELTS essays.

As mentioned in our last post about IELTS Writing Task 2 , IELTS essays generally have four paragraphs:

• One introduction paragraph.
• Two body paragraphs.
• One conclusion paragraph.

The body paragraphs should each focus on one main point or idea. The thesis, which should be part of the intro paragraph, combines these two main points into a single sentence.

For example, if your essay is about reasons why Toronto is a great place to live, then your thesis will summarize the two main reasons like this:

Toronto is a great place to live because of job availability and endless options for leisure activities.

For the above topic, the first body paragraph will focus on job availability, and the second body paragraph will focus on leisure activities.

How can I write a thesis if I don’t know what my main points are?

The answer is that you don’t.

Contrary to popular belief, you should not write your introduction first . Instead, start with the body paragraphs, then go back and write your introduction. This allows you to figure out what your main points are before combining them into a thesis statement.

If you write your thesis statement first, then you might have to change it later if you get a better idea when you’re writing your body paragraphs.

This technique is much easier to use if you are doing a computer-based test, but if you are doing a paper-based test, you can simply leave the top 1/3 rd of the page empty so that you can add your intro later.

Another option is to create a basic outline of your essay before you start writing. This way, you will have an idea of what your main points are before you start writing, and you can focus on using correct language, rather than worrying about your ideas.

Whatever technique you choose, remember that you have only 40 minutes (sometimes less if you spent a lot of time on Writing Task 1), so you better work quickly!

Can you show me an example?

Review the sample below. The highlights show how the thesis statement summarizes the main ideas from the two body paragraphs. Green shows the main idea of Body Paragraph 1, and yellow shows the main idea of Body Paragraph 2.

Question: Many people feel that cars contribute to global warming. Do you think this is true?

Introduction: Driving a car is a normal part of the day-to-day life of most people. However, in the last several years, many are considering alternative transportation options due to fears that driving contributes to global warming. It is true that using cars is a contributing factor due to CO 2 emissions and overreliance on vehicles.

Body Paragraph 1: CO 2 emissions have an obvious impact on climate change. It has been proven that CO 2 and other greenhouse gases have a warming effect on the earth’s atmosphere. What’s more, about 80% of all greenhouse gas emissions are from CO 2 , meaning that any reduction in CO 2 emissions would be good for the environment.

Body Paragraph 2: Most people use vehicles more often than they need them. It is okay to use vehicles for long trips or to transport large amounts of heavy equipment or goods, but it does not make sense to drive a car to the corner store when you can work there instead. To reduce CO 2 emissions, the population must use alternative means of transportation, such as bicycles and public transit.

Should my thesis statement be different for every essay type?

As discussed in our previous IELTS Writing Post , Writing Task 2 has five types of essays. Even though there are five types of essays, the method for writing a thesis statement is always the same. The thesis statement must always summarize the main points of the essay, no matter the type of essay.

Look at the chart below to notice the similarities between the thesis statements of different types of essays.

How do I practice?

One way to practice thesis statement writing is to find a list of IELTS Writing Task 2 questions, such as those on IELTS Liz . After you have a good list of questions, follow these four steps:

• Look at the first question on the list.
• Time yourself for two minutes.
• Write a thesis statement as fast as you can.
• After two minutes, move to the next question and repeat the process, even if you are not done.

If you follow these steps, eventually, you will become comfortable with writing thesis statements quickly, which is required for a real IELTS test.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Lessons & Tips

These  IELTS writing task 2  lessons, strategies and tips will show you how to write an IELTS essay. They go through all the various types of essay that you may get and instructions on how to best answer them.

For the Task 2, general or academic modules, you have to write an essay that must be a minimum of 250 words. You have 40 minutes. 

These lessons are free and teach you all the key things you need to know about the IELTS writing task 2, such as writing an introduction, analysing essay questions, writing for a band 7, developing coherency and understanding opinion essays.

IELTS Writing Task 2 Lessons:

How to write an ielts essay:  .

IELTS Essay This starter lessons tells you in simple steps how to structure and write a basic IELTS essay. 

Getting Ready to Write:

Identifying the Topic Learn how to identify the topic of an essay question in order to help you answer it correctly. 

Identifying the Task This IELTS practice will help you identify the task of an essay question. The most important thing to make sure you answer the question. 

Brainstorming and Planning In this IELTS lesson, learn how brainstorm ideas for your essay and how to extend those ideas and create a plan.

IELTS Task Response In this lesson we look at the dangers of not properly answering an IELTS writing task 2 essay question.

Ideas for IELTS Candidates often worry about not having any ideas for IELTS essay topics. This gives you some advise on how to generate ideas. 

Parts of an Essay:

IELTS Essay Introduction This lesson explains how you should approach writing an introduction for an IELTS Task 2 essay. 

Writing a Thesis Statement The thesis statement is an important part of your essay, so this lesson explains how to write thesis statements for different essay types. 

Paragraph Writing Writing clear and well-organized paragraphs is essential for your essay, so here you will learn about the basic elements that make up a good paragraph . 

IELTS Essay Conclusion Learn how to write a quick conclusion for an IELTS essay.

Coherency and Cohesion:

Writing Coherence One way to improve coherency in your writing is to use transition words. This lesson teaches you how. 

Pronouns Your writing must be coherent, and this IELTS practice lesson shows you how pronouns can help you to do this

Substitution Learn how to use substitution in IELTS to improve your cohesion and quality of writing.

Getting a High Band:

How to get an IELTS Writing band 7 There is no quick way to achieve this, but this lesson provides some general guidance on what is required to get an IELTS band 7 in the writing module. 

Band 7 Transitional Phrases for Essays Learn about useful phrases that can be used to improve the sophistication of your writing in argumentative essays.

How to Score IELTS Band 8 This lesson tell you more about how the scoring works for band 8 writing and how long it can take you to get a band 8.

Essay Types:

Problem Solution Essays Learn how to write a problem solution essay for the IELTS test - a quick method that will produce a well-organized answer.

IELTS Opinion Essays Get an overview of the various types of essay that ask for your opinion in the test.

Advantage Disadvantage Essay This lesson shows you how to write an IELTS advantage disadvantage essay that requires you to give an opinion. 

A Complex Essay Question This lesson shows you how to answer a more complex IELTS essay question that does not have a straightforward 'task' given to guide you.

Style and Tone:

Personal Pronouns in Essays Can you use personal pronouns such as 'I', 'our' and 'we' in IELTS essays? Find out more in this lesson.

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Here you can check out recent IELTS test essay questions from 2018 and earlier that candidates have posted, and also common essay questions and topics that have come up in the IELTS writing task 2:

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There are two relevant forums:

• IELTS Writing Task 2 Forum (topics & questions about the essay)
• IELTS Writing Band 7 Forum (dedicated to those needing a 7)

These are some of the most popular questions that have been asked about the IELTS essay in the Writing Forums:

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• How do I format the essay on the test day?
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• What are some strategies to get an IELTS band 8?

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Tips, Lessons & Models

Success in IELTS writing task 2 is based on using the right techniques. These free tips, model essays, lessons, videos and information will help develop the skills for writing task 2. This page will teach you how to maximise your IELTS writing task 2 score.

All lessons are on this page are for both GT and Academic writing task 2.

On this page, you will find for free:

• Test Information for Writing Task 2
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• Essential tips for IELTS writing task 2
• Free video lessons
• Model essays
• Practice lessons to improve your IELTS essay writing (paraphrasing, skills, ideas, spelling etc

Although some lessons are dated from years ago, all lessons and tips are 100% relevant to IELTS writing task 2 today. 

1. IELTS Writing Task 2 Test Information

Learn about your IELTS writing task 2 test.

• IELTS recommend you spend no more than 40 mins on writing task 2. However, the time is yours to manage as you wish.
• You should write  over 250 words. In the lessons below you will learn about word count and essay length.
• Learn how your total writing score is calculated: Total Writing Score Calculations
• Task Response (25%)
• Coherence & Cohesion (25%)
• Vocabulary (25%)
• Grammar (25%)
• For band score tips and details, see this page: IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Scores 
• Academic writing task 2 is a formal essay. The common types of essays are: Opinion, Discussion, Advantage/Disadvantage, Direct Questions, Solutions. These categorisations will differ from teacher to teacher depending on how they like to teach. See below for 100 IELTS Essay Questions to practise at home.
• GT writing task 2 is the same as Academic IELTS. The essay is written in the same way and the scoring is the same. The only difference is that GT essay questions are often easier and topics are simpler.
• All words will be counted, even small or repeated words. See this page: How Words are Counted
• COMPUTER DELIVERED IELTS: See the following link to read Pros and Cons of Computer Based IELTS : 
• For more information about IELTS test rules and info, see this page: IELTS  Test FAQ

2. IELTS Practice Essay Questions

Practice essay questions to help you prepare ideas for topics in IELTS writing task 2. These questions have been written based on questions reported by IELTS students. They are not IELTS tests.

Over 100 IELTS Essay Questions

3. Essential IELTS Writing Task 2 Tips

The most important writing tips for a strong IELTS essay in writing task 2. Learn about the recommended essay length, how to plan your essay, when to give your opinion and how to write an introduction etc.

How many paragraphs for an IELTS essay? : Essay structure

Key Linking Words List : Academic Vocabulary

Types of IELTS Essays : Main Essay Types in Writing Task 2

Video:  How to write an introduction paragraph : Complete lesson

Essay Planning Tips : How to plan your IELTS essay

Common Essay Topics : 20 Most Common Essay Topics

Video:  Essay Length Advice : How long should your essay be?

Video:  Official Writing Answer Sheet Tips : Using the answer sheet

When to give your opinion : Opinion Essay Tips

Video  Using the last 5 minutes : Exam technique tips

Video: Paraphrasing Tips

Finding Ideas : Developing ideas for essay topics

4. More Video & Tips for Writing Task 2

• Deleting Words in your Essay
• Should I indent the first word of my paragraphs?
• 10 sentences to avoid in your IELTS essay
• Video:  How to add examples to your essay
• Tips: Under Words Penalty
• Do advantages outweigh disadvantages tips?
• Video:   How to give your opinion
• Can you use quotes, idioms or proverbs in your essay?
• Handwriting: Using cursive writing or not
• Essay Questions from 2016
• Writing a Long Introduction: Good or Bad?
• Video : Single-sex & Mixed Schools 
• Video : Grammar – How to Add a Clause
• Video : Grammar – Connecting Sentences
• Video : Conclusion Linkers
• Video : Discussion Essay Useful Language
• Video : Using the Last 5 Minutes Tips
• Video : Should Ideas be Interesting?
• New Essay Topics for 2023

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5. Model Essays

Sample essays for IELTS writing task 2. These high score model essays will help you understand how to answer the essay questions and how to structure your writing.

• Agree Disagree Opinion Essay: Health
• Advantages & Disadvantages Essay: Language
• Cause  Solution Essay: Crime & Punishment
• Direct Questions Essay: Happiness
• Opinion Essay: Social Media
• Discussion Essay: Work
• Direct Questions Essay: Family
• Direct Questions Essay: Art
• Positive or Negative Development: Social Media
• 2 Model Essays about Economy & Money /Buildings
• Model Essay & Question for Topic of Education
• Two Question Essay: Technology

6. Practice Lessons for Writing Task 2

Develop your IELTS writing skills and get useful ideas for many essay questions. Lessons are in order of date and new lessons will be added over time.

• New Essay Topics in 2023 (these are new topics only. You also need to prepare all common topics as well)
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• Grammar Test : Using “the” with countries and nationalities
• Paraphrasing Practice 1
• Paraphrasing Practice 2
• Paraphrasing Practice 3
• Essay Questions for 2017 – questions reported in the test this year.
• Using Passive Voice for Giving Opinions
• Essay Ideas: Employment Competition
• Writing Skills: Paraphrasing Practice
• Writing Skills: Improving Sentences (2)
• Essay Ideas: The Importance of History
• Essay Ideas: Housing & Trees 
• Essay Ideas: International Aid
• Essay Ideas: City Transport
• Essay Ideas: Salaries
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• Essay Ideas: Female Staff in Senior Positions
• Writing Skills: Punctuation Practice
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• Essay Ideas: Littering in Cities
• Listen and Write Dictation: Natural Disasters
• Discussion Essay with Feedback: Music Topic
• Writing Skills: Improving Sentences: Ebooks Topic
• Essay Ideas: Banning Mobile Phones
• Two Question Essay with Feedback: Judging Business Success
• Essay Ideas: Tourism and Local Communities
• Essay Ideas: Traffic & Pollution
• Writing Skills: Improving a Thesis Statement
• Writing Skills: Improving Sentences (1)
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• Essay Ideas: Promoting to Children
• Essay Ideas: Older or Younger Leaders
• Writing Skills: Introduction Feedback
• Writing Skill: Opinion Essay Introduction Feedback
• Writing Skills: Opinion Essay Body Paragraphs
• Writing Skills: Opinion Essay Introduction
• Writing Skills: Opinion Essay Finding Main Points
• Writing Skills: Thesis Statement
• Essay Ideas: Public Services .

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How to Write an Essay Outline [IELTS Writing]

Posted by David S. Wills | Jun 6, 2022 | IELTS Tips , Writing | 0

In IELTS writing task 2, you will need to write a clear and coherent introduction . This should be comprised of several parts, one of which is a sentence that tells the reader what your essay will say or do. This is often called an essay outline , although you may hear it referred to by other names, such as “thesis statement.”

What your essay outline should say will depend upon the exact essay that you have to write, so it is a complicated issue, but this article will tell you everything you need to know.

What is an Essay Outline?

First of all, let’s briefly discuss what an essay outline is because it’s not 100% clear to everyone. The word “outline” means:

a general description or plan showing the essential features of something but not the detail

Therefore, in the context of IELTS writing task 2, an essay outline could be defined as a sentence at the end of your introduction that tells the reader what will come next.

This sentence should simply and effectively give information about what the reader will encounter in the coming paragraphs but without any of the detail that will come later. For example:

This essay will look at both sides of the issue but argue that it is best to fix problems and reach for a better situation.

Here, my sentence has made it very clear to the reader that this essay will do three things:

• Look at one side of an issue
• Look at the other side of that issue
• Argue in favour of fixing problems

In just twenty-five words, it has offered an effective outline of my essay. It has prepared my reader for what will come next, guiding them conveniently through the essay.

Do you Need an Essay Outline?

For a task 2 essay, it is generally good to have a sentence that explains the rest of your essay. This helps with both Task Response and Coherence and Cohesion . However, its necessity actually depends on the kind of question you are answering.

For any question that requires an opinion, you must include an essay outline that gives your opinion. If you don’t, you won’t get a good score for Task Response. That is because, in order to get a band 7 or higher, your essay needs to:

present a clear position throughout the response Source: IELTS band descriptors

Thus, you must make your position (ie your opinion) clear in the introduction, the body paragraphs, and the conclusion .

If you don’t need to give an opinion, then it is less important but it is still a very good idea to include an essay outline. I would strongly suggest that you write a sentence that tells the reader what you will do next.

Here are some examples…

Essay Outline Templates

The following are examples of sentences you could use for the different IELTS writing question types. Obviously, they depend on the exact question asked and your intended answer.

Agree/Disagree Questions

• This essay will disagree with the notion that _____.
• This essay will argue that ____.

Note: People often make a huge mistake in agree/disagree questions because they paraphrase the question and then give their opinion. This means that they present the opinion as their own and then either agree or disagree with themselves! This is a very serious error. You can read more about it here .

Discussion Questions

• This essay will examine both sides of the issue and conclude that…
• This essay will look at both perspectives and argue that…
• This essay will look at both viewpoints and then argue that…

Advantages/Disadvantage Questions

If you are asked to discuss the advantages and disadvantages :

• This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of…
• This essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages of…

If you are asked to weigh the advantages and disadvantages:

• This essay will argue that the advantages of ___ outweigh the disadvantages.
• This essay will argue that the disadvantages of ___ outweigh the advantages.

Problem/Solution Questions

• This essay will first look at the causes of ___ and will then suggest several solutions.
• This essay will explore the causes of ____ and also will present a possible solution.

Note: As always, your essay outline will depend on what you want to say. You may have one solution or many. Make sure that your outline matches the content.

Two-Part Questions

This essay type is harder to approach in terms of essay outline because it would depend 100% on the actual questions. However, your structure for a two-part question will usually be the same and your outline should clearly reflect this.

Here is a sample two-part question:

Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

And here is how I would write my outline:

This essay will explore why this is not a good way to raise children and why it will have negative impacts upon them in future.

As you can see, it is split into two parts: the first question is addressed and then the second. It is simple and effective.

Should you Write “This essay will” or “I will”?

You may have noticed that in all my examples above, I wrote “This essay will…” That’s because it is a little more formal to drop the personal element . Even though some questions explicitly ask for your personal opinion, you can still answer them without personal pronouns. For example:

• I believe that countries should protect their seas and I will explain why in this essay.
• This essay will explain why countries should protect their seas.

Both of these sentences are fine, but using the more neutral and objective perspective is better. It avoids being personal, which is slightly informal. However, if you feel more comfortable saying “I think/believe/feel/etc.,” then go ahead and keep doing that.

Common Mistakes

There are some problems that I see when doing my IELTS writing correction service . Some are big problems and some are small.

The worst problem, which I already mentioned above, is when people agree/disagree with themselves. This is actually a problem with the first sentence rather than the outline sentence, but still it is the outline that appears wrong. For example:

City councils should band the construction of buildings that are in a different architectural style to the traditions of that area. I completely disagree with this notion.

This is a huge problem! The author has disagreed with himself because the first sentence is presented as his own perspective. It is very important that you never do this in IELTS. Instead, you should frame the viewpoint as someone else’s:

Some people argue that city councils should band the construction of buildings that are in a different architectural style to the traditions of that area. This essay will completely disagree with this notion.

I have fixed the first sentence and now changed the second to be a bit more formal.

Another problem concerns discussion questions. People often mix up words like this:

• This essay will explain both sides of view.
• This essay will look at both sides of the view.

Basically, they have misunderstood the word “view.” A view and a side are pretty much the same thing here. We can just say “both views” or “both sides of the issue/argument/debate.”

A very common problem is to say the same thing twice, like this:

• In my opinion, I think that…
• From my viewpoint, I think that…

Keep in mind that both the first and second parts of those sentences mean the same thing!

Finally, we need to remember that an essay can do some things but it cannot do others.

There are other words that can only apply to people (ie using “I”). For example:

In other words, your essay is not conscious and so it cannot do feel anything. It can only present ideas on your behalf.

Do you Always Need an Essay Outline?

Are essay outlines always necessary? The short answer is: no. However, omitting them is a quite advanced technique and so it is generally best to include one.

If you leave out an essay outline, then your introduction must be sophisticated enough to hint at later ideas and your body paragraphs must follow on very intuitively from the intro. The benefit of doing this is that you show a subtle and intelligent grasp of cohesion whilst also avoiding formulaic language.

Here is an example:

The tourism industry has grown enormously over the last fifty years, and there are few places which are unaffected by it. However, tourism rarely benefits the countries which tourists visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Introduction:

Tourism has been around for millennia, but in the late twentieth century it exploded in popularity. Nowadays, millions of people take off on holiday during their summer and winter vacations, often to foreign countries. It generally considered a positive phenomenon, bringing the people of the world closer together and boosting the economies of developing countries. However, there are some drawbacks.

Instead of following the usual approach of saying “This essay will…” or “I think that…” I have simply said that “It is generally considered a positive phenomenon,” and then hinted at my perspective by saying “there are some drawbacks.” This shows balance and in the body paragraphs I will present both the positives and negatives , finally coming to a conclusion, which is that I neither wholly agree nor disagree. Remember: you do not always need to give a strong opinion. Balance is fine.

About The Author

David S. Wills

David S. Wills is the author of Scientologist! William S. Burroughs and the 'Weird Cult' and the founder/editor of Beatdom literary journal. He lives and works in rural Cambodia and loves to travel. He has worked as an IELTS tutor since 2010, has completed both TEFL and CELTA courses, and has a certificate from Cambridge for Teaching Writing. David has worked in many different countries, and for several years designed a writing course for the University of Worcester. In 2018, he wrote the popular IELTS handbook, Grammar for IELTS Writing and he has since written two other books about IELTS. His other IELTS website is called IELTS Teaching.

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How to Write a Great Introduction in IELTS Task 2 Essay: A Comprehensive Guide

Greetings, future IELTS conquerors! 🎉 If you're here, it's probably because you're grappling with the IELTS Task 2 Essay and, more specifically, that all-important introduction. Don't worry; we've got your back. Let's delve deep into this critical aspect of IELTS writing so that you can kick off your essay on a high note.

To make this as real as possible, we're using a sample question from a past IELTS exam. The question reads: "Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

IELTS Task 2 Essay Introduction: Why is this Important?

If you're eyeing a high band score, it’s crucial to understand the undeniable importance of a compelling introduction in your IELTS Task 2 Essay. Think of the introduction as your initial handshake with the examiner—it's your first impression, and we all know how lasting first impressions can be.

Setting the Stage for Success

Let's begin by setting the stage for what the introduction means in the context of the IELTS writing test. You're essentially setting the tone for your whole essay. Fail to engage the reader here, and you risk losing their attention for the remainder of your argument, affecting your overall band score.

Your Elevator Pitch to the Examiner

Picture this: you get into an elevator with a renowned IELTS examiner. You have merely 30 seconds to convince them why your viewpoint on the topic is worth their attention. Your introduction is that 30-second elevator pitch. It's short but powerful, capturing the essence of what's to come.

The Traffic Light Analogy

Let's consider another analogy: a traffic light. Your introduction serves as the green light that signals the reader to proceed into the depths of your essay. A confusing or dull introduction acts like a red or yellow light, making the examiner pause or even reconsider delving into the rest of your essay.

Mastering Your Introduction with IELTS Luminary

Writing a captivating introduction isn't just about following a set formula; it's an art. Luckily, it's an art you can learn. If you're struggling with constructing strong introductions, you might find incredible value in our IELTS eBooks . These resources offer comprehensive strategies for each section of the IELTS exam, including detailed tips on mastering the art of the introduction.

But, what if you've already drafted an essay and are uncertain about its quality? No worries, our IELTS Essay Correction Service is here to save the day. An experienced examiner will provide you personalized, detailed insights into your writing, including how to enhance your introductions. It's like having a personal IELTS coach who not only points out your mistakes but guides you on how to fix them.

The Ingredients of a Band 9 Introduction

Now, what goes into a stellar IELTS Task 2 Essay introduction? Three critical components:

Hook: A sentence to grab the reader's attention

Background Information: A brief context about the topic

Thesis Statement: Your main argument or opinion on the issue

Why These Three Components?

Firstly, let's demystify why thes e three components are like the Holy Trinity of your introduction. Your "Hook" works like a magnet, pu lling the reader into your essay. The "Background Information" acts as a bridge, leading the reader from your hook to your thesis statement. Finally, your "Thesis Statement" is the crown jewel, summarizing your entire essay in a nutshell. It's like a mini-roadmap of what's to come.

1.1. Crafting the Perfect Hook

Ah, the hook—the golden key that unlocks reader engagement in your IELTS Task 2 essay. It's your debut act, your brief moment to make a memorable first impression. But why does it matter so much? Well, the hook is a pivotal engagement tool that can lure the reader into your argument. It's what compels the evaluator or any reader to shift from passive reading to active engagement. If done correctly, it makes the reader think, "Wow, I need to read more about this!"

Now, when you're writing your hook, you might have a lot of questions. What type of hook is best suited for an IELTS essay? How can it align with my thesis statement? These questions are perfectly addressed in our IELTS preparation eBooks , which provide specific examples and techniques for mastering the art of the hook.

1.2. What Makes a Question an Effective Hook?

In your example, you used a particularly interesting hook: "Does unpaid community service turn high school students into responsible citizens, or is it just free labor?" This question is ingenious for several reasons. First, it's provocative; it challenges the reader's pre-existing beliefs about unpaid community service. Second, it's open-ended, encouraging the reader to ponder and question their own stance on the issue. These attributes make the reader eager to explore the perspectives you'll unfold in the subsequent paragraphs.

If you're uncertain about how well your hook aligns with the rest of your essay, our IELTS Essay Correction Service  can be a lifesaver. A seasoned examiner reviews your essay and gives you detailed feedback on how effective your hook is, among other elements.

1.3. The Role of a Hook in the Bigger Picture

While a hook is your opening act, it should never be disconnected from your main argument. It needs to be a natural prelude to the background information and thesis statement that follow. Think of your hook as the first step in a journey—you capture attention with the hook and then guide your reader down the path of understanding why your argument holds water.

Remember, a hook isn't just about being flashy; it's about being relevant and setting the stage for a compelling argument. When done right, it enhances the overall coherence and effectiveness of your IELTS Task 2 essay. And if you want to see how a complete, high-scoring essay looks like from start to finish, don't hesitate to check out our comprehensive eBooks or get detailed feedback through our Essay Correction Service .

2.1. Providing the Must-Know Background Information

So, you've successfully managed to engage your reader with a gripping hook. The next logical step is to seamlessly transition into the background information. Think of this as the foundation upon which your entire argument will stand. Without context, even the most compelling hook becomes an isolated gimmick. In essence, you're telling your reader, "Great, now that I've piqued your interest, let's dig deeper into why you should care about this topic."

For instance, in your sentence—"The debate surrounding unpaid community service as part of high school curriculums has ignited passionate discussions about educational priorities"—you've managed to encapsulate the essence of the ongoing discourse. You highlight that this isn't just a fringe topic, but one that's at the forefront of educational debates. The term "passionate discussions" indicates that there's no universal agreement, making your forthcoming argument all the more vital.

Here's a subtle tip: When crafting this section, try to present both sides of the argument briefly. This strategy not only enhances your essay's comprehensiveness but also shows you've done your homework. If you're wondering how to integrate conflicting perspectives in your essay without compromising your argument, our IELTS preparation eBooks offer some advanced techniques for this.

2.2. The Role of Background Information in Scoring High

IELTS examiners don't just want to see that you can argue a point. They want to see that you understand the larger context, that you can connect the dots. This makes your essay not just a collection of personal opinions but a well-thought-out piece that aligns with broader educational or societal issues. It's what takes your essay from a Band 6 to a Band 8 or 9. And if you're skeptical about how well you've provided background information, our Essay Correction Service can give you an examiner's perspective, evaluating the strength and relevance of your contextual setup.

3. Writing an Effective Thesis Statement: Your Answer in Brief

The thesis statement is more than just a sentence; it's the backbone of your entire essay. This is the pivotal moment where you give your reader a crystal-clear snapshot of your stance. At this juncture, ambiguity is your enemy. What you aim for is razor-sharp clarity, eliminating any room for misinterpretation. For instance, your example—"I firmly believe that integrating unpaid community service into high school curriculums can foster social responsibility among students"—is a textbook case of an impactful thesis. It does more than simply state an opinion; it conveys conviction through the words "firmly believe."

But why is conviction so important? In the IELTS Task 2 landscape, a wishy-washy thesis statement can drastically undermine the potency of your argument. A strong thesis, however, does the opposite. It solidifies your viewpoint, providing a sturdy framework for the supporting paragraphs that follow. To put it another way, it's the anchor that keeps your essay from drifting into a sea of vagueness.

By using the phrase "foster social responsibility among students," you're also subtly highlighting the essay's central theme. You're not just talking about unpaid community service; you're talking about its capacity to instill social responsibility—a skill vital for the growth of the individual and the community.

Now, you might be wondering, "How do I know if my thesis statement is strong enough?" Well, that's something our Essay Correction Service is perfectly suited for. Our team of examiners can provide in-depth feedback on the effectiveness of your thesis statement, along with suggestions for improvement. And if you're looking to get a deeper understanding of constructing powerful thesis statements, our eBooks are packed with strategies and examples that can guide you.

Example Introduction of a Band 9 IELTS Essay

Based on our discussion of essential components like the hook, background information, and a robust thesis statement, here's how a high-standard introduction might look:

"Does unpaid community service in high schools serve as a stepping stone to responsible adulthood, or is it simply a form of free labor? This contentious issue has sparked numerous debates about the very essence of education and social development. I strongly assert that incorporating unpaid community service into high school curriculums is not merely a social obligation but a fundamental aspect of cultivating socially responsible citizens."

This introduction effectively grabs the examiner's attention with a thought-provoking hook, provides essential background information, and concludes with a compelling thesis statement. It's designed to set the stage for a persuasive essay, guiding the reader seamlessly into the ensuing arguments.

Wrapping Up the Discussion

Now, if you're wondering how to blend all these elements into a compelling narrative, we’ve got something special for you. Our IELTS eBooks cover these topics and much more, providing practical tips and exercises to fine-tune your writing skills.

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So there it is: your foolproof guide to constructing a Band 9 introduction for your IELTS Task 2 Essay. With a riveting hook, relevant background information, and a clear thesis statement, you’re setting yourself up for a top-notch essay and, ultimately, a higher band score. Keep tuning in for more actionable IELTS tips and strategies.

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IELTS Writing Task 2: tips for structuring a discussion essay effectively

Master the IELTS Writing Task 2 with our guide on structuring arguments effectively. Elevate your discussion essay writing skills for higher scores.

As you embark on the path of IELTS preparation, the IELTS Writing Task 2 stands as a crucial milestone, shaping your journey towards academic and professional success. This segment, known for testing clarity, coherence, and argumentative prowess, often emerges as a formidable challenge for many test-takers.

In this detailed guide, we navigate through the intricacies of the IELTS Writing Task 2, focusing on effective argument structuring—a skill pivotal in elevating your discussion essay writing and boosting your overall score. Dive into strategic insights and tips, designed to not only acquaint you with the nuances of the Writing Task 2 but also to enhance your proficiency and confidence in crafting compelling, well-structured arguments.

8 Tips on how to structure an argument in your essay

A well-structured argument is the backbone of a successful discussion essay. Let's explore the key strategies to structure it proficiently:

1. The thesis statement

The thesis statement forms the bedrock of your essay in IELTS Writing Task 2, nestled within the opening paragraphs to introduce your central argument. It's the compass that directs the flow of your essay, clearly stating your position on the topic.

For instance, take the discussion question which lays out opposing views: “Some people believe that buying from reputable pet breeders is ethical, while others believe that there is a risk of buying from unscrupulous sellers and causes common issues in pet ownership, like abandonment.”

A robust thesis statement could be, “While there are ethical pet breeders who operate lawfully, I believe that individuals should refrain from purchasing pets from breeders as they may have dubious business practices and contribute to problems of neglect and abandonment by irresponsible pet owners.”

This statement not only lays out your stance in a clear and debatable manner but also sets a coherent path for the rest of your essay. Each paragraph should then serve to reinforce this thesis, presenting arguments and evidence in support of your view. Straying from your thesis statement can cause your essay to lose focus and persuasive power, so it's crucial to maintain a consistent and aligned argument throughout.

2. Developing your arguments

In the IELTS Writing Task 2, developing strong, coherent arguments is essential for an impactful essay. Begin by brainstorming ideas that align with and support your thesis. For instance, in an essay that asks you to discuss the most effective way of ensuring environmental conservation, consider arguments about renewable energy and international treaties, each supported by examples. It's crucial that each argument not only presents factual information but also critically interprets these facts, showing how they reinforce your thesis. This approach ensures that your essay goes beyond merely stating facts, offering a persuasive, cohesive narrative that strengthens your overall argument.

3. Paragraph structure

Mastering paragraph structure is pivotal in crafting a coherent and persuasive essay for the IELTS Writing Task 2. Each paragraph should begin with a topic sentence that clearly introduces its main idea, setting the tone for the arguments to follow. For example, a sentence like “Renewable energy, particularly solar power, is instrumental in combatting global warming,” establishes a focused topic. The subsequent sentences should elaborate on this idea, incorporating supporting details, examples, or data, and concluding with a sentence that ties the idea back to your overall thesis. This methodical approach ensures each paragraph contributes to the overall argument of your essay, maintaining a logical flow that is easy for the reader to follow and understand.

4. Transitioning between points

Effective transitioning is essential in the IELTS Writing Task 2 to ensure a seamless flow of ideas and maintain the coherence of your essay. Transitional phrases such as “furthermore,” “conversely,” or “as a result” are instrumental in connecting paragraphs and ideas. For instance, after illustrating the benefits of renewable energy, you could transition with, “Conversely, the high initial costs and technological limitations present significant challenges.” Such transitions not only help in guiding the reader through the progression of your argument but also highlight the logical relationships between your points. A well-executed transition not only enhances the readability of your essay but also reinforces its argumentative structure, making your essay more compelling and coherent. Remember, the fluidity with which your ideas connect can greatly impact the persuasiveness and clarity of your argument, both critical factors in achieving a higher score in the IELTS writing section.

5. Using appropriate evidence

In the IELTS Writing Task 2, bolstering your arguments with robust evidence is key to constructing a persuasive essay. However, you will not have access to external resources such as the internet during the test, meaning you won’t be able to include statistics or case studies unless you have them memorised.

Instead, the type of evidence used should be based on your own knowledge and experience, showing your own deeper understanding of how the subject applies to daily life. For example, in an essay related to sustainability, you can bring in the measures you personally take to lead a sustainable life, such as using reusable cutlery. Still, it’s important to not just present evidence, but to link it explicitly to your thesis, explaining how it substantiates your point. This approach demonstrates not only your understanding of the topic but also your ability to engage critically with a topic, a skill highly valued in the Writing Task 2. Properly integrated evidence can transform your essay from a series of assertions to a compelling, evidence-based argument, significantly enhancing its impact and effectiveness.

6. Addressing counter arguments

Effectively addressing counter arguments is a critical aspect of constructing a compelling essay in the IELTS Writing Task 2. This approach not only showcases your understanding of the topic from multiple perspectives but also strengthens your argument. When presenting a counter argument, it's crucial to first acknowledge it respectfully and then systematically dismantle its validity using logical reasoning or evidence. For instance, if your thesis statement supports online learning, a counter argument might be the lack of personal interaction. You could counter this by describing your experience with communities on online learning platforms. By addressing opposing views in this manner, you demonstrate critical thinking and the ability to engage in a nuanced debate, both of which are valuable skills in the Writing Task 2 and essential for attaining a high score. Ultimately, the key is to respect the counter argument while clearly illustrating why your position remains stronger and more valid.

7. Conclusion strategies

The conclusion in the IELTS Writing Task 2 serves as the final impression you leave with the reader, reinforcing your thesis and summarising the key points of your argument. It's essential to revisit your thesis statement here, drawing together the threads of your discussion to reinforce your stance effectively. For example, if your essay argues in favour of renewable energy, your conclusion should succinctly recapitulate how your arguments support this stance, highlighting the environmental and economic benefits. Avoid introducing any new information; instead, focus on providing a clear and concise synthesis of the presented ideas. A well-crafted conclusion not only strengthens the coherence of your essay but also emphasises the logical progression of your thoughts, leaving the reader with a definitive understanding of your position. This part of the essay is crucial for consolidating your argument and ensuring that your points resonate with the reader long after they have finished reading.

8. Final editing and review

The final editing and review stage is a vital component of succeeding in the IELTS Writing Task 2. With typically 40 minutes at your disposal, an effective strategy would be to allocate approximately five to 10 minutes for initial planning, 25 to 30 minutes for writing, and the final five to 10 minutes for revising and proofreading. This structured approach allows you to thoroughly examine your essay for structural integrity, coherence, and clarity. Ensure that your arguments align with the prompt and are logically presented with relevant evidence and examples. In your final review, scrutinise for grammatical accuracy, fluidity in transitions, and overall persuasiveness. This dedicated time for revision can be the difference between an average and a high-scoring essay, as it gives you the opportunity to refine your argument and rectify any overlooked errors.

Actionable tips during the test

Effective time management and clarity of thought under exam conditions are pivotal. Here are some strategies to enhance your performance during the test:

Time management: Devise a balanced approach for planning, writing, and reviewing. Allocate five minutes for brainstorming and outlining your essay, 30 minutes for actual writing, and use the remaining time for revising and proofreading.

Staying focused: Maintain clarity and focus. Engage in brief mindfulness exercises before the test to ensure a calm and concentrated mind. Stay on task and avoid distractions.

Idea generation and structuring: Quickly brainstorm and organise your ideas. Use the initial planning time to jot down main arguments and supporting evidence, ensuring a clear and logical structure for your discussion essay.

Avoiding pitfalls: Stay vigilant against common errors such as straying off-topic or using overly complex sentence structures. Ensure your writing is direct, relevant to the prompt, and easy to follow.

Responding to the prompt: Carefully read and understand the essay prompt. Tailor your arguments and examples to directly answer the question posed, ensuring that every part of your essay contributes to your overall response.

Mastering argument structure for higher scores

Mastering the art of structuring an argument in the IELTS Writing Task 2 is a skill that develops with practice and dedication. At IDP, we understand the nuances of IELTS preparation and are committed to supporting your academic journey. We offer comprehensive resources to help you refine your writing skills, including access to comprehensive IELTS preparation materials online and free IELTS online practice tests or exams. To enhance your learning experience, don’t hesitate to enrol in IELTS preparation courses or classes. Access them at any time by downloading the IELTS by IDP app and increase your chances of achieving a higher score in your IELTS test.

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Tips to Write an Effective Introduction

Updated On Oct 07, 2022

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Many IELTS test candidates devote a lot of effort to practising their essay writing. The main goal of the IELTS writing module is to evaluate the test-takers’ writing abilities. Particularly taking into account the elements of vocabulary, grammar, spelling, and the capacity for writing. Success in the IELTS writing test relies heavily on essay writing.

Have you ever felt challenging to write an essay in IELTS Writing task 2?

All IELTS learners (even IELTS teachers) reckon that the most difficult part of writing is how to get started. Getting started, or writing an introductory paragraph, can be easy if you remember that an introduction has four purposes:

• Introduce the topic of the essay.
• Arouses the reader’s interest in the topic.
• Indicates the overall “plan” of the essay.
• Tells reader what the essay is about

In the IELTS writing exam, the examiners are not looking for the interesting introduction as it is not assessed in your IELTS essay. In other words, there is no difference between the fascinating introductions and boring ones in IELTS exam. In addition, time is another pressure for IELTS Writing. You have to do a lot of things in your essay for the IELTS writing within 40 minutes, for example, analysing the statement, planning your essay, and proofreading it when you have finished, so actually you just have about 35 minutes to write your essay. There is not enough time for you to worry about having “a hook” in an introduction.

Basically, the introduction has two parts:

• General statements
• A thesis statement

You should aim for around 50 words for the length of your essays.

How to structure your introduction:

• Your introduction should be 2- 3 sentences
• Sentence 1 -2 :  General statement. Introduce the topic of the essay.
• Sentence 3:  Thesis statement. Keep it clear, and get to the point. “ While I agree that governments and individuals are spending a significant amount of money on those celebrations, I would argue that this activity is necessary and therefore can be considered acceptable.”

Beer in mind that specific examples from your own experience shouldn’t be included in the introduction paragraph (instead the body paragraph).

GENERAL STATEMENT:

General statements aim to:.

• introduce the topic of the essay
• give background information on the topic

How to write a general statement?

When it comes to writing a general statement, the first sentence in an introductory paragraph should be a very general comment about the subject. Each subsequent sentence should become more specific than the previous one and finally, lead into the thesis statement.

Make sure you do it by paraphrasing the statement of the question, which means you need to write it again with the same meaning but use your own words. This act helps you to increase your score in the IELTS writing test, for instance:

Question : In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development . This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

General Statement : It seems to be an increasingly widespread concern for the effects of urbanisation with the imbalance in living standards between the city and the outskirt.

Obviously, you can see in this example; the writer used the different vocabularies with the same meaning to introduce also give the background information on the topic.

THESIS STATEMENT:

What is the definition of thesis statement.

A thesis statement is usually a sentence to offer a concise summary of the main point or claim of your IELTS essays and follows the general statement. It is critically important in your IELTS writing task 2 because it is your answer or your opinion/point of view about the given topic in the Writing test. It will guide IELTS examiner what your essay is about and help keep your argument focused.

So don’t get it mixed up with the general statement which tells the reader what topic of your essay is at the beginning of your introduction.

So, how to write a good thesis statement?

There are a range of essay question types in IELTS Writing Task 2, namely:

• Opinion (Agree or Disagree)
• Discussion (Discuss both view)
• Advantages and Disadvantages
• Problem and Solution
• Two-part Question

  The first thing we need to do is to identify which type of question it is and look at the action words. For example, in the question below the action words are ‘do you agree or disagree?’

Question: The government and individuals are spending too much money on national celebrations like new year or festivals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We, therefore, need to tell IELTS examiner clearly whether we agree or disagree, and this will influence our thesis statement. So, the thesis statement should be as follows:

People have different views about whether public expenditure on national occasions such as new year or festivals is too much nowadays. While I agree that governments and individuals are spending a significant amount of money on those celebrations, I would argue that this activity is necessary and therefore can be considered acceptable.

As can be seen, the above sentence makes it crystal clear to IELTS examiner what you think about the question. The rest of your IELTS essay will go on supporting this thesis statement.

How does the thesis statement change with different types of question?

We will now look at how thesis statements can vary with different question types. However, you should not try to learn set phrases or sentences to fit certain essays.

The golden rule is to  always read the question very carefully  and figure out what you have to do.

Your thesis statement will then follow on from this, depending on what you have decided you need to write about in order to answer the question.

Sample thesis statements for 5 essay question types in IELTS Writing Task 2:

• Opinion (Agree or Disagree) Topic: Too much emphasis is placed on going university for academic study. People should be encouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Thesis statement: It goes without saying that society always needs a skilled workforce to function. Employees of different professions contribute differently to the thriving of the community, and therefore I disagree with the statement that vocational courses should be given any more weight than before.
• Discussion (Discuss both view) Topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion Thesis statement: Many people show preference for repeating their daily routine while others always look for change as they believe change would bring more benefits. In my opinion, I would agree with the latter point of view.
• Advantages and Disadvantages Topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion Thesis statement: Many people show preference for repeating their daily routine while others always look for change as they believe change would bring more benefits. In my opinion, I would agree with the latter point of view.
• Problem and Solution Topic: There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect for others. What are the causes and solutions? Thesis statement: The widespread problem of anti-social behaviours and disrespectful attitudes towards others has long been a major topic of concern in society. Some of the major culprits of this problem will be discussed before the most important solutions are drawn.
• Two-part Question Topic: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.  In what ways has technology affected the types of personal relationships?  Has this become a positive or negative development? Thesis statement: Rapid advances in technology have undoubtedly affected the way we interact in various ways. While some of this change can exert a negative impact on the way we communicate with each other, my view is that overall modern technology typically improves communication in personal relationships.

Below are two potential introductions with different thesis statements for IELTS essay question. Choose which one is better.

IELTS Essay Question:

Some people believe increasing business and cultural contacts between countries is a positive development while others argue that it is a threat to the identity of a nation? Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Introduction:

Intro 1: It is sometimes argued that increasing business and cultural contacts between countries are a positive development. I believe that the trend is a threat to identity a nation.

Intro 2: It is sometimes argued that increasing business and cultural contacts between countries  is a positive development. Such positive elements include increased employment prospects, increased commerce, and increased multilateral harmony. However, I believe that this trend is a threat to the identity of a nation.

IELTS examiner’s comment:

Intro 2 is the better one. A better thesis statement (and an increase in coherence) would be to state what the reasons’ are. For example, sentence two could be “Such positive elements include increased employment prospects, increased commerce, and increased multilateral harmony.” Remember that a clear position throughout is a key feature of TR and a strong thesis statement is a great start to alert the examiner that you making your position very clear in the beginning. (notice that the above use of increased’ three times in this context is an effective writing technique)

I hope the tips mentioned above could help you to hike up your IELTS score in the IELTS writing test! Stay tune for the latest update on IELTS Material website.

Don’t forget to keep practicing to write an introduction to get yourself familiarized with the IELTS test and get the high score in IELTS.

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IELTS Writing Tasks How to Write Task 2 Introductions

To score highly for IELTS writing tasks, you need to impress the examiner from the very first sentence. This lesson will show you how.

In it you’ll learn:

• Why the introduction is so important
• The 3 part structure
• 4 common mistakes to avoid
• How to write a great introduction

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Why the Introduction is So Important

Beginning your IELTS writing tasks well will immediately start stacking up the marks for both Task Achievement and Coherence and Cohesion which together carry 50% of the marks.

A good introduction does several things:

• It gives an excellent first impression.
• It shows the examiner that you understand the question.
• It gives the examiner a brief overview of what you’ll cover in the rest of the essay.
• It focuses your thoughts and keeps you on track while writing.

The 3 Part Structure

A good introduction has a simple 3 part structure:

• Paraphrased question

Thesis statement

Outline statement.

This structure can be used for any type of question. It should:

• Have 2-3 sentences
• Be 40-60 words long
• Take 5 minutes to write

Before I show you how to write good introductions to Task 2 IELTS writing tasks, I want to flag up some common errors students make to help you avoid them.

4 Common Mistakes

# 1  not being specific enough.

It’s tempting to start your essay with a general statement about the topic of the question. Don’t do this. You need to be very specific. Here’s an illustration of a poor opening sentence.

Everybody should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. 

• To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Bad first sentence:

These days, many people are worried about their health and changing their diet is one way that they try to improve it.

This is not a question about health in general but one specifically about becoming a vegetarian for health reasons.

A good first sentence will paraphrase the question, that is, it will state the same information using different language and often, a different sentence structure as well.

We’ll be looking at paraphrasing and an example of a good first sentence later in this lesson.

# 2  Not writing a thesis statement

A thesis statement is a summary of the main idea of your essay. When the examiner reads it, they will instantly know whether or not you have understood the question correctly. It also acts as an outline for the rest of your essay.

This makes the thesis statement the most important sentence in your essay. If you get it right, you will have got off to the perfect start.

There’s an easy to remember formula for writing thesis statements which we’ll be studying below. For now, here’s an example relating to our sample question.

Thesis statement : This essay agrees that the world’s population should stop consuming meat due to the related health risks.

Note the use of synonyms to paraphrase the question.

# 3  Not stating your opinion

Task 2 IELTS writing tasks generally require you to give your opinion. Usually, this will be clearly stated in the question. For example, the instruction might say,

        or

• Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In other questions, it won’t be so clear that this is what you should do. For example,

• What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?

However, your opinion – the main idea of your essay – is still required. If you always include it in the introduction, as well as throughout your essay, you won’t go wrong.

# 4  Using inappropriate language

For Task 2 essays, you must use formal language. Most students understand this.

However, many candidates make the mistake of trying to use clever or complex language to add interest or to show off their high-level language skills.

Keep tight control of your language. This is a very short essay and you don’t have the time or space to get carried away with elaborate words and phrases.

Get the information across quickly and succinctly using everyday language that includes topic words and their synonyms.

Most importantly, use the language correctly. The more complex you make it, the more errors you’re likely to make.

I show you how to write essay introductions for each of the 5 question types on their individual pages where I go into everything in much more detail.

Opinion Essays  – Agree or Disagree

Discussion Essays

Problem Solution Essays  + Causes & Solutions

Advantages & Disadvantages Essays

Double Question Essays

For the rest of this page, I’ll go through just one example to illustrate some of the points I’ve made.

How To Write a Great Introduction

Here’s a reminder of the 3 part structure you should use for all task 2 IELTS writing tasks.

Paraphrased Question

Start your introduction by paraphrasing the question.

Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside.

Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Paraphrased question:   The migration of the younger generation to urban areas is leaving many rural locations populated predominantly by the elderly.

Note the use of synonyms for many of the keywords. For example,

• young people – younger generation
• countryside – rural locations
• cities and towns – urban areas
• leaving – migration
• old people – the elderly

You don’t have to replace them all but do so where possible without making the sentence sound awkward.

It’s fine to repeat one or two words. Don’t spend too much time trying to think of synonyms or use ones you are not 100% sure are correct.

The thesis statement states your opinion on the topic. In most instances, you simply need to decide whether to agree or disagree with it and to reiterate the main idea of the statement. For example,

Thesis statement:  This essay argues that the loss of young people from the rural landscape has problematic consequences.

This thesis statement states the opinion of the writer and paraphrases the question again in a way that makes this view clear.

Finally in the introduction, you must outline the two main points that you’ll cover in the rest of the essay. This acts as a guide to the examiner and also helps to keep you focused and on track as you write.

Do it in one sentence, or you can add them onto the end of the thesis statement if appropriate.

Outline statement:   The two most serious are, the depletion of the rural workforce and the loss of local education facilities.

These two ideas will become your two main body paragraphs.

• Main body paragraph 1 – the depletion of the rural workforce . 
• Main body paragraph 2 – the loss of local education facilities.

The Finished Introduction

So now, let’s pull the whole introduction together.

Final introduction:

The migration of the younger generation to urban areas is leaving many rural locations populated predominantly by the elderly.  This essay argues that the loss of young people from the rural landscape has problematic consequences.  The two most serious are, the depletion of the rural workforce and the loss of local education facilities.

These three sentences exactly follow the 3 part structure I showed you for creating introductions to task 2 IELTS writing tasks and also avoid the common mistakes I outlined above.

This short paragraph would be an excellent introduction to an essay on this topic.

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IELTS Writing Task 2: how to answer the question

By Fiona on May 6, 2024

This IELTS Task 2 lesson shows you how to tackle a 2-part questions that you've never thought about before.

Why is there a declining interest among young people to do farming. Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

In this lesson, we will cover: ideas, question types, hedging ('tend to'), giving reasons ('due to'), synonyms, how to refer to research and reference words.

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👋 Nhắn cho DOL để tìm hiểu chi tiết về các khóa học IELTS nhé!

Hướng dẫn chi tiết cách viết Introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2 từ A - Z

Bài viết Writing Task 2 yêu cầu thí sinh hoàn thành một bài viết trong vỏn vẹn 40 phút. Tuy nhiên, bạn còn lăn tăn không biết mở đầu bài viết như thế nào? Bạn mất nhiều thời gian cho IELTS Writing Task 2 Introduction ? Trong bài viết này, hãy cùng Dol xử lý nhanh gọn hiệu quả vấn đề này với cách viết Introduction trong IELTS Task 2!

Các bước viết Introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2 từ chi tiết

1. Có nên dùng Introduction mẫu trong IELTS Writing Task 2

Việc dùng các cấu trúc cố định trong phần mở đầu của bài viết Writing Task 2 là hoàn toàn cần thiết. 

Nhiều người học IELTS, kể cả khi đã có nền tảng về bài thi, vẫn phải ‘cắn bút’ không biết viết gì và lãng phí thời gian vô ích. Việc sử dụng ‘template’ giúp thí sinh tăng tiến độ hoàn thành bài viết và tránh được tình trạng hoang mang không biết mở đầu bài viết như thế nào cho đúng.

Trên thực tế, khi có một ‘template’ cố định cho IELTS Writing Task 2 Introduction , người học sẽ có một định hướng tốt hơn khi viết, tránh được tình trạng mỗi bài viết một kiểu.

Nếu có gì đó DOL không anti học vẹt, thì nó chỉ có thể là IELTS writing task 2 template . Đó là hướng dẫn cốt lõi của bài viết, giúp tránh lạc đề và lan man.

2. Cách viết Introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2

Giống như bất kỳ dạng bài viết nào, IELTS Writing Task 2 cũng cần có một phần mở đầu giới thiệu nội dung của bài viết. 

2.1. Mục đích

Khi viết đoạn mở bài cho bài viết Writing Task 2, thí sinh cần đảm bảo thực hiện được các mục đích sau:

Tạo ấn tượng cho người đọc

Thiết lập bối cảnh hoặc chủ đề của bài viếtiệt kê các nội dung quan trọng trong bài viết . 

Một đoạn mở bài tốt sẽ tạo ra định hướng chung cho toàn bài viết cũng như liên kết mạch lạc với các đoạn thân bài và kết bài.

2.2. Cấu trúc chung

Do độ dài của bài viết nhìn chung khoảng từ 300 từ trở xuống, đoạn thân bài không cần quá dài dòng mà nên tóm tắt lại trong từ 2 đến 3 câu.

Phần thứ nhất (1 - 2 câu) được gọi là General Statement , được dùng để nêu chủ đề của bài viết.

Phần thứ hai (1 câu) được gọi là Thesis Statement , chứa đựng nội dung chính hoặc quan điểm của người viết xuyên suốt bài viết.

2.2.1. GENERAL STATEMENT

️🎯 Mục đích

General statement được dùng để giới thiệu chủ đề của bài viết, thông qua việc trình bày lại sự thật, xu hướng, hoặc quan điểm đã được đề bài đề cập đến.

📝 Cách viết

Điểm mấu chốt để có được một phần General Statement tốt chính là diễn đạt lại đề bài bằng ngôn ngữ của bản thân bằng kỹ thuật ‘paraphrasing’ . Người viết có thể thực hiện thay thế các từ cho sẵn bằng các từ đồng nghĩa , hoặc thay đổi cấu trúc câu và thứ tự của các từ trong câu . 

Tuy nhiên, cần lưu ý rằng, điểm mấu chốt của kỹ năng ‘paraphrasing’ chính là không được thay đổi nghĩa của câu gốc, thêm các thông tin không có trong câu gốc, hoặc bỏ sót thông tin quan trọng trong câu gốc. 

2.2.2 THESIS STATEMENT

Ở phần Thesis statement , người viết cần đưa ra một câu trả lời rõ ràng và trực tiếp cho câu hỏi mà đề bài đưa ra bằng cách nêu quan điểm cá nhân hoặc tóm tắt các ý chính của bài viết.

Đầu tiên, bạn cần xác định chính xác dạng câu hỏi mà đề bài đưa ra. Cụ thể, IELTS Writing Task 2 được chia làm 5 dạng bài chính như sau:

Discussion 

Advantages and Disadvantages

Problem and Solution

Two-part Question

Dựa vào các ACTION WORD của câu hỏi mà bạn có thể xác định được dạng bài của bài viết và trả lời đúng và đủ câu hỏi mà đề bài đưa ra.

Điểm quan trọng mà người viết cần lưu ý chính là câu Thesis statement cần ngắn gọn, cô đọng được các nội dung trọng tâm của bài viết, và thể hiện một quan điểm rõ ràng.

Ngoài ra, quan điểm này còn cần được duy trì và thống nhất xuyên suốt các ý tưởng và câu chữ của bài viết, cho đến phần kết bài.

Có nhiều ý kiến khác nhau về việc đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân trong bài luận, một số người cho rằng chỉ cần nêu quan điểm cá nhân ở phần kết luận. Tuy nhiên, những người khác nói rằng nó nên được nêu trong phần giới thiệu. Lựa chọn an toàn và hợp lý nhất là nêu quan điểm của bản thân trong phần mở đầu, đưa ra lập luận cho nó trong các đoạn thân bài, sau đó khẳng định lại trong phần kết luận. https://ted-ielts.com/introduction/

2.3. Hai bước viết Introduction 

👉 Bước 1: Phân tích bố cục của đề bài.

Mỗi đề bài đều bao gồm hai phần: 

Phần 1 : Giới thiệu chủ đề hoặc quan điểm cần bàn luận

Phần 2 : Đặt ra câu hỏi hoặc yêu cầu dành cho thí sinh

Ví dụ : Some people think that good planning is the key factor for success in life. Others think that there are more important factors that lead to success (hard work, luck). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Câu đầu tiên của đề bài trình bày hai quan điểm trái chiều: ‘Some people think that good planning is the key factor for success in life. Others think that there are more important factors that lead to success (hard work, luck).’

Câu thứ hai của đề bài đặt ra cho thí sinh câu hỏi ‘Discuss both views and give your own opinion.’ để họ diễn giải câu trả lời của mình thông qua bài viết.

👉 Bước 2: Thực hiện paraphrase phần 1 và trả lời phần 2 

Đầu tiên, người viết cần xác định được rằng đề bài đang đưa ra một quan điểm (opinion) hay một sự thật (fact) .

Tiếp theo, người viết có thể chọn một trong số các mẫu câu dưới đây để bắt đầu bài viết của mình và thực hiện ‘ paraphrasing ’ để diễn đạt lại đề bài bằng ngôn ngữ của bản thân.

Dưới đây là hướng dẫn viết General Statement cho đề bài trên:

→ Câu đưa ra hai quan điểm trái chiều.

Dùng cấu trúc: Some people are of the opinion that … However, others opine that … Các từ vựng đã được thay thế:

good planning ~ wise arrangement

key factor ~ of utmost importance

factors ~ elements

lead to success ~ contribute to success

Đối với phần thứ hai của mở bài - Thesis Statement, người viết cần thực hiện hai bước:

Mời bạn xem thêm các 7 cách cải thiện kỹ năng viết trong IELTS Writing nhé:

3. Cách viết Introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2 cho từng dạng bài

3.1. agree or disagree essay.

Agree or Disagree là dạng câu hỏi yêu cầu người viết trình bày quan điểm cá nhân sau khi đã cung cấp một một nhận định nào đó. Người viết có thể nhận biết dạng bài này thông qua các câu hỏi như: 

Do you agree or disagree?

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Để viết mở bài cho dạng bài này, người viết thực hiện các bước sau:

Có thể mở đầu câu bằng một cấu trúc dùng để đưa ra quan điểm (trong bảng trên) và thực hiện ‘paraphrasing’ đề bài trong 1 câu.

Ở câu thứ hai, đưa ra một câu trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng đối với quan điểm mà đề bài đưa ra. Đối với dạng đề Agree or Disagree , người viết có 2 cách để trả lời và mỗi cách có một cấu trúc mẫu khác nhau như sau:

Dưới đây là một số mở bài gợi ý cho cả 3 hướng tiếp cận bài viết Agree or Disagree:

3.2. Discuss both views

Dạng bài Discuss both views hay Discussion đòi hỏi người viết thảo luận về hai quan điểm trái chiều của một vấn đề nào đó và đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân (ủng hộ quan điểm nào).

Người viết có thể nhận biết dạng bài này thông qua câu lệnh ‘Discuss both views and give your own opinion.’

Cách viết Introduction trong IELTS Task 2 cho dạng bài ‘ Discuss both views’ như sau

Thực hiện ‘paraphrasing’ hai quan điểm mà đề bài đưa ra, sử dụng mẫu câu dùng để đưa ra hai quan điểm trái chiều (trong bảng trên).

Ở câu thứ hai, đưa ra một câu trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng rằng bản thân mình ủng hộ hay đồng ý với quan điểm nào trong số hai quan điểm mà đề bài đã nêu, sử dụng các mẫu câu thể hiện sự đồng tình tương tự như ở dạng bài Agree or Disagree .

Dưới đây là một số mở bài gợi ý cho dạng bài Discuss both views:

3.3. Problems and Solutions

Dạng bài Causes and Solutions hay Problems and Solutions yêu cầu thí sinh trình bày các nguyên nhân gây ra vấn đề (causes), các hậu quả phát sinh (problems), và các giải pháp giúp cải thiện vấn đề (solutions). Người viết có thể nhận biết dạng bài này thông qua các câu hỏi như:

What are the causes of problems? How to overcome it?

What is the reason for this?

What are the problems? Suggest some solutions.

Cách viết mở bài IELTS Task 2 cho dạng bài này như sau:

Thực hiện ‘paraphrasing’ hai quan điểm mà đề bài đưa ra, sử dụng mẫu câu dùng để trình bày vấn đề, hay một sự thật đang diễn ra (ở bảng trên).

Ở câu thứ hai, đưa ra một câu trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn về các nguyên nhân/ hậu quả, hoặc giải pháp sẽ đề cập đến trong phần thân bài.

Dưới đây là một số mở bài gợi ý cho dạng bài Causes and Solutions và Problems and Solutions :

3.4. Advantages and Disadvantages

Dạng bài Advantages and Disadvantages yêu cầu thí sinh trình bày các lợi ích và bất lợi của một vấn đề. Người viết có thể nhận biết dạng bài này thông qua các câu hỏi như:

Is this a positive or negative development?

Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of … ?

Ở câu thứ hai, đưa ra một câu trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn về các lợi ích và bất lợi, có thể thêm vào các cụm từ thể hiện ý kiến cá nhân như “From my perspective”, “From my viewpoint”, ‘Personally’, hoặc “In my opinion”.

Dưới đây là một số IELTS Writing Task 2 Introduction gợi ý cho dạng bài Advantages and Disadvantages :

Xem thêm về phương pháp làm Introduction IELTS Writing task 2

4. Lưu ý cần biết khi viết Introduction IELTS Writing Task 2

Để có được một phần mở bài hiệu quả, DOL có một số lời khuyên dành cho bạn:

Chỉ dành ra tối đa 5 phút cho phần mở bài, do bạn cần đủ thời gian để hoàn thành thân bài - phần chính và quan trọng nhất trong bài viết.

Bạn nên tuân theo cấu trúc mở bài 2 câu (bao gồm General Statement và Thesis Statement).

Khi viết phần General Statement, không nên chép lại toàn bộ đề bài mà không có bất cứ sự điều chỉnh nào. Điều này có thể sẽ khiến giám khảo không có ấn tượng tốt về bài viết, cũng như đánh giá không cao về trình độ từ vựng và ngữ pháp của bạn.

Tránh diễn đạt sai vấn đề hoặc quan điểm được trình bày trong phần đề bài

Không được thêm bớt các ý so với chủ đề/ quan điểm gốc mà đề bài đã cho.

Cố gắng tạo sự ấn tượng ở phần mở bài

Chú ý cách dùng từ, tránh diễn đạt thiếu tính trang trọng

5. Phân biệt Introduction kém và tốt

Hãy quan sát một ví dụ về Introduction kém (khoảng band 4.0) và Introduction tốt (khoảng band 8.0) cho đề bài dưới đây:

There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Introduction kém :

Nowadays, cars are a very popular way of getting around. Day by day many more people drive cars around but others feel that they cause global warming. Global warming is one of the most serious issues in modern life. They also affect people’s health and well-being which is also a serious issue.

+ Lối diễn đạt quá dài dòng và không đi vào trọng tâm (Nowadays, cars are a very popular way of getting around” hay “Day by day many more people drive cars around”)

+ Mở bài này là không có câu Thesis Statement

Introduction tốt :

It is a common belief that rising global temperatures and detrimental impacts on human beings’ overall health are caused by the increasing usage of automobiles. Personally, I am totally convinced by this viewpoint.

=> Đặc điểm của phần Introduction tốt:

Thực hiện ‘paraphrasing’ để hoàn thiện câu General Statement vô cùng hiệu quả với một vốn từ vựng đa dạng.

Câu Thesis Statement thể hiện quan điểm cá nhân rõ ràng, và trả lời trực tiếp cho câu hỏi mà đề bài đưa ra.

Các câu hỏi thường gặp

Làm thế nào để viết một phần giới thiệu tốt trong IELTS Writing Task 2?

Phần giới thiệu bài luận nên bao gồm ba điều chính, theo thứ tự sau:

Một câu mở đầu để thu hút sự chú ý của người đọc

Thông tin cơ bản có liên quan mà người đọc cần biết

Một câu luận điểm trình bày quan điểm hoặc lập luận của người viết

Nên dùng thì nào trong IELTS Writing Task 2?

Thì hiện tại hoàn thành là thì được sử dụng nhiều trong IELTS Writing Task 2.

Những lỗi nào bị mất điểm khi viết Introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2?

Có 5 lỗi phổ biến khi viết introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2:

Nói quá chung chung về chủ đề

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Trên đây là các hướng dẫn chi tiết của DOL về cách viết Introduction trong IELTS Writing Task 2 . Hy vọng các bạn có thể áp dụng tốt các lưu ý trên khi thực hành viết bài luận Task 2, cũng như trong kỳ thi chính thức sắp tới của các bạn. Hãy bắt tay ngay vào việc luyện tập nhé! Chúc các bạn thành công trên con đường chinh phục kỹ năng Writing của bài thi IELTS.

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Top 10 website sửa bài ielts writing uy tín và chất lượng nhất.

Trong hành trình học IELTS Writing, việc đạt được band điểm mơ ước đòi hỏi sự nỗ lực và kiên nhẫn từ các thí sinh. Tuy nhiên, nhiều thí sinh vẫn gặp khó khăn trong việc tiến bộ, và lý do chính là thiếu việc luyện tập viết IELTS Writing thường xuyên và không tuân thủ thời gian đủ cho cả hai bài task 1 và 2. Đặc biệt, việc không có người sửa bài Writing thường xuyên cũng là một trong những nguyên nhân chính. Tất nhiên, việc đến trung tâm để có giáo viên chỉnh sửa cũng là một giải pháp hiệu quả. Tuy nhiên, nếu không có đủ thời gian và điều kiện, việc sử dụng công cụ AI sẽ là một lựa chọn hữu ích để rèn luyện và cải thiện kỹ năng viết IELTS của bạn. DOL gợi ý cho bạn 10 website sửa bài IELTS Writing sử dụng công nghệ AI uy tín và chất lượng nhất. 1. Grammarly 2. Write and Improve with Cambridge 3. PaperRater 4. Test Big 5. Google Bard 6. ChatGPT 7. IELTS Answers 8. IELTS Advantage 9. IELTS-Blog 10. IELTS Podcast Hãy cùng DOL điểm qua các website sửa bài IELTS Writing sau nhé!

Cách dùng Write and Improve tự học IELTS Writing hiệu quả

Kỹ năng viết là một trong những yếu tố quan trọng nhất trong kỳ thi IELTS. Để đạt điểm cao trong phần thi Writing, bạn cần trau dồi kỹ năng viết một cách bài bản và hiệu quả. Bài viết này sẽ giới thiệu cho bạn cách dùng Write and Improve tự học IELTS Writing hiệu quả. Write and Improve là trang web miễn phí được phát triển bởi Đại học Cambridge và iLexR, cung cấp nhiều tính năng hữu ích giúp bạn nâng cao kỹ năng viết tiếng Anh, đặc biệt là cho phần thi IELTS Writing. Hãy cùng theo dõi các phần tiếp theo của bài viết để khám phá bí quyết chinh phục IELTS Writing cùng Write and Improve!

Cách dùng QuillBot tự học IELTS Writing hiệu quả

QuillBot là một công cụ trực tuyến, giúp bạn viết lại câu hoặc đoạn văn bản tiếng Anh một cách sáng tạo và tự nhiên, mà vẫn giữ nguyên nghĩa gốc. Không chỉ vậy, QuillBot còn cung cấp nhiều tính năng hữu ích khác như. 1. Tóm tắt nội dung: Giúp bạn rút gọn văn bản dài thành những ý chính ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu. 2. Kiểm tra ngữ pháp: Phát hiện và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, giúp bạn viết tiếng Anh chính xác hơn. 3. Gợi ý từ vựng: Đề xuất những từ vựng phù hợp để thay thế từ ngữ hiện có, giúp bài viết phong phú và đa dạng hơn. Với những tính năng mạnh mẽ này, QuillBot sẽ hỗ trợ bạn đắc lực trong việc nâng cao kỹ năng viết tiếng Anh và luyện thi IELTS Writing hiệu quả. Hãy cùng DOL khám phá cách dùng QuillBot học IELTS Writing và trải nghiệm những lợi ích tuyệt vời mà công cụ này mang lại!

Cách dùng Grammarly tự học IELTS Writing hiệu quả

Grammarly là một công cụ trực tuyến giúp bạn kiểm tra và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, chính tả, dấu câu và phong cách viết trong tiếng Anh. Nó sử dụng trí tuệ nhân tạo tiên tiến để phân tích văn bản của bạn và đưa ra những gợi ý sửa lỗi chính xác, giúp bạn viết tiếng Anh trôi chảy và tự tin hơn. Trong bài viết này, DOL sẽ cung cấp các tính năng, hướng dẫn cụ thể và những lưu ý quan trọng khi sử dụng ứng dụng Grammarly. Cùng đọc tiếp bài viết để hiểu được cách dùng Grammarly vào việc học IELTS Writing nhé!

Cách dùng Bing AI để tự học IELTS Writing lên ý tưởng hiệu quả

Bing AI là một công cụ trí tuệ nhân tạo (AI) tiên tiến được phát triển bởi Microsoft, có khả năng xử lý ngôn ngữ tự nhiên một cách ấn tượng. Đây là một công cụ hỗ trợ viết hiệu quả, giúp bạn lên ý tưởng sáng tạo, sắp xếp logic, sửa lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, trau chuốt từ vựng, cung cấp thông tin và dẫn chứng, đồng thời chấm điểm và góp ý chi tiết để bạn nâng tầm kỹ năng viết. Trong bài viết này, DOL sẽ cung cấp cho bạn cách dùng Bing Ai học IELTS Writing cụ thể và những lưu ý quan trọng khi sử dụng. Hãy cùng DOL khám phá bí quyết sử dụng Bing AI để chinh phục điểm cao trong bài thi IELTS Writing. 

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